Sorry if it was a misunderstanding with the versions at some point, to make it simple, patrons are one update ahead, so, from now on a new release for patrons equals a free version available too.
In the usual style of itch.io's renpy VNs, where 80% of the time you're just clicking through locations to find what you're supposed to do, even tho there's only one thing to do. It's even more irksome in this story because the plot and narrative literally revolves around the protagonist losing agency, and so the player also has very little agency, despite having to follow along with the rather linear plot. I'm nearly an hour into this, and the main character just annoys me.
PS, since when is it illegal for a teacher to play video games with a student???? In what country???? This is what I'm saying—the MC just whines for no other reason than to whine, even when his whining makes no sense.
If you hate the MC, then I accomplished my principal goal. I can't reveal more information about future parts of the story, so nobody can see what I'm planning just yet, is completely fine if you don't like the story, it's not for everyone, that's for sure, thank you for giving the game a try anyway, and one more thing, remember the MC is not a teacher, he's a psychologist, you expect a psychologist to be more professional when it comes to helping people, their principles are closer to a medic than a teacher.
Yeah, I played the game to the (current) end. I can see how the MC can improve over time, I just find him too whiney. And yeah, he's not a teacher, but a psychologist, but I still don't think there's really any legal issue there. Even ethically, it's not so bad. If the patient needs someone else to play video games with them to keep them faithful to a sleep schedule, getting a friend to be that person would be ideal, but there's nothing wrong with the psychologist taking that role if there isn't really a better option.
Probably, being a friend to the patient could be a good idea, but at least in the story context, he's not worried because of the action, he's worried for go any further with her, don't forget he's pretty new to advising people, so, he doesn't even know what is illegal or not, he's just guessing at that point.
Bro just big googoo gaga bitch to MC in 18+ games thats funny, in what country he said god please save him 😂 ITS A FUCKING VIDEO GAMES STUPID, even your whining didnt make any sense too
I just finished playing the current public version and it was really great. I was surprised with the amount and quality of content for such an early version. I can't wait to see more of this game and hopefully can support the project in the future.
Just finished whats released free! And goodness, the dialogue and story writing made me completely forget i was looking for lewd material and felt like i was getting into a really good anime. I'm super excited for more to come out!
Got an error while interacting with natsumi during the weekend. During her evening scene (watch TV together), the game can't display the image "me4_natsumi_5", the dialogue plays correctly and it doesn't cause further errors.
Amazing story so far! Just a couple issues where some events don't progress the day properly or you can't access an event after coming out of an event, without napping, like in the cafe with Hana, then going back to the office to talk to the principal, or looking in the hall for the gamer girl after talking to her in your office, and having a permanent or midday "work" button to pass the time (or more) would be nice instead of having to nap so often
oh my what can i say this made my day i entred looking for lewd stuff mid game i realised that i ididnt care for that anymore the charcters are so well written like how she delets her texts and start over and just says hi i find that so touching cuz i felt that way one day and how the princple hates him for little reason and just dosent accept the fact that he is not lazy anymore is so real
at last this game is the best itch.io game so far from story im looking forword to it <3
I have to say that so far, I love it! I think the atmosphere got me hooked immediately, time went by so fast when playing this and I was sad when it ended cuz I need MOAR!!! (Of course take your time, I understand game/story developing can be draining sometimes.)
One thing that sorta bugs me is that there's not much going on when exploring areas, there's no one in the background so it makes everything feel a bit eerie but maybe that eeriness is what you're going for and if so I understand it.
So far i LOVE the game, i may not be too far into it but so far, great story and character personality, One thing im trying to understand is when our name glitches, i think i understand that purple/indigo is pissed off, orange is caring, but i cant really figure out cyan. mabey if their was a menu that showed what the colors meant. other than that great game.
I just finished playing the game and it's really good but I wish you could add random characters in school so it doesn't feel empty and somethings to do between the event's 👍
I'm a few hours in and the story is pretty good so far. One thing that's a little strange though is the pacing. For example, there will be a story event on Friday, then the next event is on Monday. Then after Monday's event, the next is in Saturday. There's not anything to do between those events other than grind the sleep option. Maybe that's something that will be adjusted or possibly something else can be added? Just seems strange that the story event and animation quality is really well done, but the empty space between kind of drags it down.
The story of this game is pretty great so far, looking forward to future updates. I don't even really care for any future lewd content, the story is very strong.
This is probably best VN game i've ever played, im amazed how well the story is written, with every character that have uniqe personality and also the main protagonist, THIS IS MASTERPIECE.
So this game is one of the best visual novels i played the story is really interesting that alot of times it hitted the deepest part of my heart the characters are just adorable i cant wait for the new updates for this game i really hope you you will reach high with this game :)
First time playing this game, it was an amazing experience (didn't finish the game yet) but so far story, animation, music even UI it just amazing and easy and simple to navigate i can feel how much love you put into this game with every character development not just a "woohoo fukkaroonie games" its like story as main dish and h-scene as dessert perfect proportion between fantasy and reality really pull my sympathy and empathy to the character, please take my compliment as motivation rather than pressure that make you focus in my commend rather than doing what you love thank you :)
PS : i found some missing image in "platform android ver 0.2.1 public" which is (me4_natsumi_5, me5_natsumi_6 and me5_natsumi_7, if you already notice this problem i'm sorry and thank you
Man, i really hope, that you will continue to make this game for years, or many more like this one after BrokenDreams, i love the story, characters and everything really (and im blender user, so i absolutely understand how much work was done, and i absolutely love what you have made with school, and everything else! Masterpiece!) For the lewd part, im all in for smaller breasts, so i love your choices with characters. Anyway, looking forward for update, and i just wish that you could make progress tracker, so we would know where you are at making it, anyway, keep going, wish you luck and take care!
Thank you so much, my friend! I'm impressed by how many people this game have been reached, and glad to know some of them are blender users hehe. This is a big project, with big ambitions, it's a reality that a big part of the game depends on the level of support that we receive from the community, but our principal goal it's to make the best visual novel ever🤍 maybe we don't have a millionaire budget, but we have the passion for making a good story, that's all that we need🤍 Again, thank you so much for your feedback🤍
Thanks for the supprt, buddy! I'll all my best to make the game better! I also have game status in discord, so y'all can track the progress of the game. Small tits, big hits!
this game was AMAZING i liked the story a lot but theres 1 thing, pls add more h-scenes ( im a very horny person haha ) other than that this game was very cute and i loved it, looking forward to new updates!!!!
Oh, man🔥you only need to wait a little bit longer for all the content that is coming... omg, I'm so excited. I want to share the scenes that I have already, but I must resist... thanks for your patience in advance, you're not gonna be disappointed.
If you want more information about h-scenes, this post is for you:
this has been the only H-game to ever draw me in with it's story, the dissapoitment i felt when the game said "to be continued" completely dissapeared when i thougt of how great the experience was
I don't know how you think an concept game like this but, this game hits me so hard because i do keep dreaming a certain girl in a sea where waves are so gentle while the moon shine above us but that was back then. Up until this day i kept waiting to go back in that dream but i can't to the point i forgotten i had a peaceful dream like in the game, but this game made me remember all over again, i don't care about the 18+ scene i want the upcoming stories in the future please be well and keep up the good work!!
EXCELLENT GAME!!! I loved it a lot!! I am looking forward to the next version, please release it soon!! Congratulations to the developers!! Just add the Spanish language, please :D
Thank you so much🤍To be completely honest, adding new languages is not on our plans (right now). If the community keeps growing, we could reconsider it :)
Oh :( ty, Actually, a while ago I played version 0.1 Spanish Mod and I thought it was the original, I enjoyed playing it much more in my native language, for that reason I'm telling you about it, thank you very much c:
The game used to have an official Spanish translation, but we decided to discontinue it because it was so chaotic for testing and debugging, anyway, we're not against the idea of adding more languages in the future.
So a couple of notes playing through 0.2.1 as a new player:
This game, at least as it stands, is obviously a slow burn. It doesn't just jump into the sex. It doesn't (again, as it stands,) use sex as a plot point for the player character like most erotic VNs I've seen, which I can respect. And aside from a shower scene and some spicy pictures you get at the very tail end of the update (unless I fucked up a choice somewhere), there's very little in the NSFW region so far.
The way to move around between locations is fairly seamless, aside from clicking around inside the house. The backgrounds look lovely, and the overall ambiance and lighting are amazing, though one thing I noticed is the distinct lack of music playing outside of conversations and cutscenes. Which while it felt strangely jarring to going from no music to suddenly having what sounds like generic atmospheric piano number 1, it's not so much of a turn off that I would quit playing.
The female characters are beautifully made and extremely well written. There's an obvious amount of depth to the girls so far that can be felt just by talking to them in cutscenes and learning of their problems and traumas through storytelling; Natsumi's abuse and need to put others above herself, Kaede's need for self acceptance, Hana's want for attention, the principals need to be in complete control (or for dick I can't figure out which). Though I wish the dev had gone more in depth with the other side of Nova's coin that causes the player to be more "chaotic".
The only problem I have so far is that the player character feels like they're going out of their way to be an unlikable dick. Almost like he just took a job in psychology to not do, y'know, his job as a psychologist. And his inner monologues reinforce that. I'm not sure, but his disdain for what he does just feels kinda forced instead of being naturally socially awkward in their own way.
In short, the game so far is amazing. The art, the style, the writing and feel are very impressive. And tackling issues like mental health in an erotic VN, while I'm sure has been done before, makes for a very different and unique story. The only thing I ask, is make the MC not necessarily likable, but at least more relatable or tolerable. Solid work dev, I will be watching this game with great interest.
Thank you for taking the time to write such an extensive review, one o my principal goals is to make the sandbox part less empty, adding music, people, and more interactions.
I appreciate all the comments about the graphics, it's been a lot of work to achieve what I wanted to do since the beginning, talking about the visuals.
And one more thing, you're not the only one complaining about the MC's behavior, and that's completely fine, the game is at a pretty early stage, and for obvious reasons, I haven't had the opportunity to explain more about his relations, emotions, and most importantly, his past, I know that play an incomplete game with a depth story could be like reading a book with a bad story, that's a reality I can understand, the only thing I need from all my players is patience, nothing in the story is there just for keep adding content endlessly, I'm very cautious when it comes to writing because I want a story that makes sense. Thank you so much for all the feedback 🤍
You're welcome for the feedback, and I thank you for your reply. The work you've put in definitely shows in what's currently available, and I find it amazing as it is.
And I don't mean to come off as complaining about the MC's behavior, but he is definitely confusing coming from an outside perspective who isn't aware of the story.
Thank you again for taking the time to review my feedback though! And please keep doing what you do. As I said, I look forward to seeing what this will become, and I will be watching with great interest. :) ❤️
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L'ETS GOOOO 0.3 FINNALY OHHHH but i hate u cuz i know u need money but 5$ oh ayaaaa help me
3D assets aren't cheap 😓 thank you for your patience though🤍
What time while the update become public?
When the 0.4 comes out for patrons, late May to be precise.
Oh I thought it was coming out today.
Sorry if it was a misunderstanding with the versions at some point, to make it simple, patrons are one update ahead, so, from now on a new release for patrons equals a free version available too.
In the usual style of itch.io's renpy VNs, where 80% of the time you're just clicking through locations to find what you're supposed to do, even tho there's only one thing to do. It's even more irksome in this story because the plot and narrative literally revolves around the protagonist losing agency, and so the player also has very little agency, despite having to follow along with the rather linear plot. I'm nearly an hour into this, and the main character just annoys me.
PS, since when is it illegal for a teacher to play video games with a student???? In what country???? This is what I'm saying—the MC just whines for no other reason than to whine, even when his whining makes no sense.
If you hate the MC, then I accomplished my principal goal. I can't reveal more information about future parts of the story, so nobody can see what I'm planning just yet, is completely fine if you don't like the story, it's not for everyone, that's for sure, thank you for giving the game a try anyway, and one more thing, remember the MC is not a teacher, he's a psychologist, you expect a psychologist to be more professional when it comes to helping people, their principles are closer to a medic than a teacher.
Yeah, I played the game to the (current) end. I can see how the MC can improve over time, I just find him too whiney. And yeah, he's not a teacher, but a psychologist, but I still don't think there's really any legal issue there. Even ethically, it's not so bad. If the patient needs someone else to play video games with them to keep them faithful to a sleep schedule, getting a friend to be that person would be ideal, but there's nothing wrong with the psychologist taking that role if there isn't really a better option.
Probably, being a friend to the patient could be a good idea, but at least in the story context, he's not worried because of the action, he's worried for go any further with her, don't forget he's pretty new to advising people, so, he doesn't even know what is illegal or not, he's just guessing at that point.
Bro just big googoo gaga bitch to MC in 18+ games thats funny, in what country he said god please save him 😂 ITS A FUCKING VIDEO GAMES STUPID, even your whining didnt make any sense too
Your comment makes zero sense.
Release finished version, pls :')
It will be available for free soon! I just need to finish a few things for the 0.4 version, thank you for your patience.
I just finished playing the current public version and it was really great. I was surprised with the amount and quality of content for such an early version. I can't wait to see more of this game and hopefully can support the project in the future.
Thank you so much 🤍
Does v0.3 have animated scenes ?
Just finished whats released free! And goodness, the dialogue and story writing made me completely forget i was looking for lewd material and felt like i was getting into a really good anime. I'm super excited for more to come out!
Thank you so much 🤍
I- i really enjoyed that game... i loved it alot...
Glad you liked it🤍
when is next verison coming?
Mc gotta be bigfoot or slenderman or somn. Bro is a whole 6,7 point guard working at a school
6,6 ;)
Is there a h scene in new update?
Yes, but it's not animated, if you want to see animated scenes, please wait until late May, thanks.
Got an error while interacting with natsumi during the weekend. During her evening scene (watch TV together), the game can't display the image "me4_natsumi_5", the dialogue plays correctly and it doesn't cause further errors.
Thank you for the report!
Amazing story so far! Just a couple issues where some events don't progress the day properly or you can't access an event after coming out of an event, without napping, like in the cafe with Hana, then going back to the office to talk to the principal, or looking in the hall for the gamer girl after talking to her in your office, and having a permanent or midday "work" button to pass the time (or more) would be nice instead of having to nap so often
I'll correct those issues in future updates, thank you for pointing out the weak points! 🤍
oh my what can i say this made my day i entred looking for lewd stuff mid game i realised that i ididnt care for that anymore the charcters are so well written like how she delets her texts and start over and just says hi i find that so touching cuz i felt that way one day and how the princple hates him for little reason and just dosent accept the fact that he is not lazy anymore is so real
at last this game is the best itch.io game so far from story im looking forword to it <3
These kinds of comments are the reason why I'm a game developer 🤍 Glad to know you enjoyed it!
I have to say that so far, I love it! I think the atmosphere got me hooked immediately, time went by so fast when playing this and I was sad when it ended cuz I need MOAR!!! (Of course take your time, I understand game/story developing can be draining sometimes.)
One thing that sorta bugs me is that there's not much going on when exploring areas, there's no one in the background so it makes everything feel a bit eerie but maybe that eeriness is what you're going for and if so I understand it.
I'm excited for future updates!
I'll add more variety to the sandbox moments! thanks!
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This game like therapy i was waiting this game like other but it's better i hope this game continues (add feeding fish i feel bad for it)
Hehe, give me some time, I'll see what can I do, my friend.
So far i LOVE the game, i may not be too far into it but so far, great story and character personality, One thing im trying to understand is when our name glitches, i think i understand that purple/indigo is pissed off, orange is caring, but i cant really figure out cyan. mabey if their was a menu that showed what the colors meant. other than that great game.
That's the interesting part... You have to figure it out!
I just finished playing the game and it's really good but I wish you could add random characters in school so it doesn't feel empty and somethings to do between the event's 👍
Thank you for the feedback!
I'm a few hours in and the story is pretty good so far. One thing that's a little strange though is the pacing. For example, there will be a story event on Friday, then the next event is on Monday. Then after Monday's event, the next is in Saturday. There's not anything to do between those events other than grind the sleep option. Maybe that's something that will be adjusted or possibly something else can be added? Just seems strange that the story event and animation quality is really well done, but the empty space between kind of drags it down.
Thank you for the feedback!
how do I buy clothes after getting hana's credit card?
You can't, you have to wait until the 0.3 update or buy it on Patreon to get it early
ahhh, okok. thank you!
No problem
I thought i was playing a normal vn game The story was so good And Nova is just so beautiful bro i wish i was him
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The game really makes you forget it's an nsfw game.
I can't wait to see how the story progresses
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You really made me forget this is an adult game...thanks
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The story of this game is pretty great so far, looking forward to future updates. I don't even really care for any future lewd content, the story is very strong.
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This is probably best VN game i've ever played, im amazed how well the story is written, with every character that have uniqe personality and also the main protagonist, THIS IS MASTERPIECE.
Glad you enjoyed the game, thank you so much for your words 🤍
This game is incredible and did u gave a name at the possession colors ?
I can't reveal more information :) sorry, my friend, but I'm excited about reading theories about ... them (?
Okay~
Is the next version close? a hint please :')
Stay tuned for important news tomorrow, an update is just a few days ahead.
I'm thanking you for making this game because it's so beautiful and it touches my heart and playing this game makes me feel that I'm also dreaming🥺💝
Thank you so much 🤍
So this game is one of the best visual novels i played the story is really interesting that alot of times it hitted the deepest part of my heart the characters are just adorable i cant wait for the new updates for this game i really hope you you will reach high with this game :)
I hate that Itch.io doesn't allow me to pin comments :´) Thank you so much, your kind words inspire my job🤍
This game is so absurdly good in such an early stage it's actually unbelievable
Thank you so much🤍
this game is intresting, the story was so cool. watch my word, this game will trending/viral in no time.
Thank you! I hope so, my friend🤍
whether this game will be continued or not. actually this game is very interesting. I hope this game continues :)
The development is ongoing and everything suggests that it will continue for a long long time ;)
First time playing this game, it was an amazing experience (didn't finish the game yet) but so far story, animation, music even UI it just amazing and easy and simple to navigate i can feel how much love you put into this game with every character development not just a "woohoo fukkaroonie games" its like story as main dish and h-scene as dessert perfect proportion between fantasy and reality really pull my sympathy and empathy to the character, please take my compliment as motivation rather than pressure that make you focus in my commend rather than doing what you love thank you :)
PS : i found some missing image in "platform android ver 0.2.1 public" which is (me4_natsumi_5, me5_natsumi_6 and me5_natsumi_7, if you already notice this problem i'm sorry and thank you
Thank you 🤍
Don't worry, nothing will stop me from creating what I love :)
Man, i really hope, that you will continue to make this game for years, or many more like this one after BrokenDreams, i love the story, characters and everything really (and im blender user, so i absolutely understand how much work was done, and i absolutely love what you have made with school, and everything else! Masterpiece!) For the lewd part, im all in for smaller breasts, so i love your choices with characters. Anyway, looking forward for update, and i just wish that you could make progress tracker, so we would know where you are at making it, anyway, keep going, wish you luck and take care!
Thank you so much, my friend!
I'm impressed by how many people this game have been reached, and glad to know some of them are blender users hehe. This is a big project, with big ambitions, it's a reality that a big part of the game depends on the level of support that we receive from the community, but our principal goal it's to make the best visual novel ever🤍 maybe we don't have a millionaire budget, but we have the passion for making a good story, that's all that we need🤍 Again, thank you so much for your feedback🤍
Thanks for the supprt, buddy! I'll all my best to make the game better! I also have game status in discord, so y'all can track the progress of the game. Small tits, big hits!
this game was AMAZING i liked the story a lot but theres 1 thing, pls add more h-scenes ( im a very horny person haha ) other than that this game was very cute and i loved it, looking forward to new updates!!!!
:3
Oh, man🔥you only need to wait a little bit longer for all the content that is coming... omg, I'm so excited. I want to share the scenes that I have already, but I must resist... thanks for your patience in advance, you're not gonna be disappointed.
If you want more information about h-scenes, this post is for you:
https://biggering.itch.io/broken-dreams/devlog/483478/0-3-news
Thank you for your kind words 🤍
this has been the only H-game to ever draw me in with it's story, the dissapoitment i felt when the game said "to be continued" completely dissapeared when i thougt of how great the experience was
I'm glad you liked it 🤍
*chef kiss* great story it's give me tears when mc welcoming natsumi can't wait for next update.
Ohhhh when want to watching tv with natsumi the image is error i hope you can fix it, im playing on android tho
Noted ✅ Thank you so much for your feedback 🤍
Image 'me4_natsumi_5' not found is what I got as well.
Can Confirm that is present on the PC version too.
I don't know how you think an concept game like this but, this game hits me so hard because i do keep dreaming a certain girl in a sea where waves are so gentle while the moon shine above us but that was back then. Up until this day i kept waiting to go back in that dream but i can't to the point i forgotten i had a peaceful dream like in the game, but this game made me remember all over again, i don't care about the 18+ scene i want the upcoming stories in the future please be well and keep up the good work!!
Wow, thank you for sharing your experience here🤍 makes me feel that this game has a special bright.
EXCELLENT GAME!!! I loved it a lot!! I am looking forward to the next version, please release it soon!! Congratulations to the developers!! Just add the Spanish language, please :D
Bro how much time it will take to complete this game?
A normal playthrough is around 3 hrs or so, that depends on your reading speed.
Thank you so much🤍To be completely honest, adding new languages is not on our plans (right now). If the community keeps growing, we could reconsider it :)
Oh :( ty, Actually, a while ago I played version 0.1 Spanish Mod and I thought it was the original, I enjoyed playing it much more in my native language, for that reason I'm telling you about it, thank you very much c:
The game used to have an official Spanish translation, but we decided to discontinue it because it was so chaotic for testing and debugging, anyway, we're not against the idea of adding more languages in the future.
So a couple of notes playing through 0.2.1 as a new player:
This game, at least as it stands, is obviously a slow burn. It doesn't just jump into the sex. It doesn't (again, as it stands,) use sex as a plot point for the player character like most erotic VNs I've seen, which I can respect. And aside from a shower scene and some spicy pictures you get at the very tail end of the update (unless I fucked up a choice somewhere), there's very little in the NSFW region so far.
The way to move around between locations is fairly seamless, aside from clicking around inside the house. The backgrounds look lovely, and the overall ambiance and lighting are amazing, though one thing I noticed is the distinct lack of music playing outside of conversations and cutscenes. Which while it felt strangely jarring to going from no music to suddenly having what sounds like generic atmospheric piano number 1, it's not so much of a turn off that I would quit playing.
The female characters are beautifully made and extremely well written. There's an obvious amount of depth to the girls so far that can be felt just by talking to them in cutscenes and learning of their problems and traumas through storytelling; Natsumi's abuse and need to put others above herself, Kaede's need for self acceptance, Hana's want for attention, the principals need to be in complete control (or for dick I can't figure out which). Though I wish the dev had gone more in depth with the other side of Nova's coin that causes the player to be more "chaotic".
The only problem I have so far is that the player character feels like they're going out of their way to be an unlikable dick. Almost like he just took a job in psychology to not do, y'know, his job as a psychologist. And his inner monologues reinforce that. I'm not sure, but his disdain for what he does just feels kinda forced instead of being naturally socially awkward in their own way.
In short, the game so far is amazing. The art, the style, the writing and feel are very impressive. And tackling issues like mental health in an erotic VN, while I'm sure has been done before, makes for a very different and unique story. The only thing I ask, is make the MC not necessarily likable, but at least more relatable or tolerable. Solid work dev, I will be watching this game with great interest.
Thank you for taking the time to write such an extensive review, one o my principal goals is to make the sandbox part less empty, adding music, people, and more interactions.
I appreciate all the comments about the graphics, it's been a lot of work to achieve what I wanted to do since the beginning, talking about the visuals.
And one more thing, you're not the only one complaining about the MC's behavior, and that's completely fine, the game is at a pretty early stage, and for obvious reasons, I haven't had the opportunity to explain more about his relations, emotions, and most importantly, his past, I know that play an incomplete game with a depth story could be like reading a book with a bad story, that's a reality I can understand, the only thing I need from all my players is patience, nothing in the story is there just for keep adding content endlessly, I'm very cautious when it comes to writing because I want a story that makes sense. Thank you so much for all the feedback 🤍
You're welcome for the feedback, and I thank you for your reply. The work you've put in definitely shows in what's currently available, and I find it amazing as it is.
And I don't mean to come off as complaining about the MC's behavior, but he is definitely confusing coming from an outside perspective who isn't aware of the story.
Thank you again for taking the time to review my feedback though! And please keep doing what you do. As I said, I look forward to seeing what this will become, and I will be watching with great interest. :) ❤️