The story is really interesting, I can't wait to see more! Really rather early for me to comment as I haven't made it very far in the game yet but, between that and the screenshots it's easy to tell that the game is better than you'd probably expect it to be.
I really like how fresh this game feels. Not that it really matters how you usually see the same school and house in other VN's but I like how it's different and how much better they look in this one. Also am really liking how different the character models are even though it's Koikatsu, usually they look a little plastic-y and almost doll like. I mean, they still do but they also look softer and much more high-quality than usual. That coupled with the lighting makes them look even better than they already are!
Thank you so much🤍 A little bit of recognition for details is always an incredible compliment for devs, I'm glad you liked all the backgrounds and atmosphere that I tried to create in the game, you can expect more quality on future releases, that's a promise.
What a fantastic game you have here so far. I actually welcomed the lack of forced H-scenes just for the sake of having them. The story is fresh and pulls you into itself and makes you beg for more! I can't wait to see how the MC evolves and changes. Good luck on future updates!
It's a pretty good game, and how well developed it is, the game just gets better every update and it's very noticeable. It has a very good story, very good music, and some very good characters, counting on the things that changed, they made it much better than it already was. Keep up the good work, you are doing pretty well!
"Although short as of writing this review(01/22/23), the story is captivating and makes you wanna know what happens next ASAP. I would take a star off because there are a lack of H-scenes but I'm sure that will be addressed in future updates since this game is still fairly early on in it's development. Highly recommend either playing or at least saving for later because there is great potential and a dedicated development team actively working on it."
Thank you so much for the feedback, just wait for the 0.3, too early to talk, but I just want to say, it's been a lot of work, and a lot of testing, all those who have been waiting for lewd content are going to be so happy.
im not played the game because its in very early of the development which means there wont be a much content at least now.But looks like general commenting positive, i will download at future
Hi! The development of the new version is ongoing, without a release date yet, but I will make an announcement about new content very soon, Thank you so much for playing. 🤍
Late reply, but it's the games problem (according to devs the problem was because of custom name or something that they mentioned on discord) so even if you click/tap ignore it'll just get back on some devices and get the error again.
PS: I'll just wait for the update tho since the devs already fixed the bug and they're going to release along with new updates:)
Thank you! Unfortunately, it seems that the old saves do not work in this version, I recommend you start a new game, if you can't, you should force the application to close in the background applications menu , my apologies for the inconvenience, I will try to make this the last update incompatible with old saves.
Also if you are planning to add more languages into the game i can help with Turkish translation.. If you want, because i didn't saw any developer adding Turkish into their games (on Itch)
Hmmm... Those are certainly weird bugs, I have to see the code again and I will try to fix it ;)
Thank you so much for the feedback!
At the beginning of the project, the plan was to create a linear story, but alas, with all the feedback from my players, (and because I got a great idea) Now the goal is to add decisions that change your playthrough FOREVER, you will be able to see it on the new version that is coming very soon ;) Actually, these decisions will don't make so much difference in the story (apparently) but be careful... everything is going to change depending on what you chose.
For the Turkish translation, join the discord if you want to and send me a message---> https://discord.gg/MNPsBbXWe2
Well I have good english-turkhis translation but IDK how those programs work if you know someone that knows it can you tell me or dm to me maybe I can help you with the game too BTW if I can learn how does it works I think I can make somethings faster (Im talking about updates)
i have a pc question for anyone that can help ... if i get a new graphics card for my older pc will that allow me to play games that my pc has rendering problems with ???
Look's interesting, since it's early stages will wait and see how it develops, will give feedback specifically for the game then.
The only thing I can think of is to point out some traps to avoid as you develop your game. Sorry if this is too wordy and blunt.
- Adding too many characters. Turns the game into a never ending cycle of additions and ultimately a game that never gets completed, makes it harder and harder to put enough character development in every character and can result in a lot of 'doll' characters with cliche/uninteresting personalities. Probably not fun to do either since it just adds more and more work.
- Fixed Patch by patch plotline progression. You might be thinking what do you mean by this, i.e patch 2.1 = plot prog with char A 2.2 = plot prog char B 2.3 plot prog char C then 2.4 plot progpart2 char A.. and so on. Now the Fixed part = you have to play 2.2 and 2.3 plots to unlock 2.4 plot. Whatever you do don't make it like this, it's super frustrating for a reader to have to go back and forth with different characters. A route system is always preferred.
- make a good story and have that be highest priority, some other games just abandon this completely after a while and only focus on making porn scenes and never finish the game.
@Amr I mean in the future, dont worry there's nothing im saying about the game right now if it seemed like that. Just want to be sure there's no misunderstanding here.
Thank you so much for the feedback, characters development it's the priority of BROKEN DREAMS before entering other phases of the game, I'm trying my best to bring the players the best visual experience and memorable moments.
For the progression system, I'm working on it, I want to bring the most smooth experience.
I think you started to create a good story and I think you should continue like that. I have only one request, if the money system is added in the future updates, please don't break the balance because in some games we earn very little money and the price of what we need to buy is too high. I hope it won't be like this (Sorry for my bad English because my main language is Turkish but I can still understand the story)
Don't worry my friend, there is no plan for adding a money system in the future because I think it doesn't fit with the spirit of the narrative, I want to everyone feel less limited, in my game, you don't have to repeat the same action hundreds of times to get money ( for example). I don't like that on visual novels, we are here for the juicy story. but that's just my opinion my friend, thank you for the feedback!
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I love the amount of effort put into the design of this game. Like even this itchio page is so fun to look at.
Thank you 🤍
The story is really interesting, I can't wait to see more! Really rather early for me to comment as I haven't made it very far in the game yet but, between that and the screenshots it's easy to tell that the game is better than you'd probably expect it to be.
I really like how fresh this game feels. Not that it really matters how you usually see the same school and house in other VN's but I like how it's different and how much better they look in this one. Also am really liking how different the character models are even though it's Koikatsu, usually they look a little plastic-y and almost doll like. I mean, they still do but they also look softer and much more high-quality than usual. That coupled with the lighting makes them look even better than they already are!
Thank you so much🤍 A little bit of recognition for details is always an incredible compliment for devs, I'm glad you liked all the backgrounds and atmosphere that I tried to create in the game, you can expect more quality on future releases, that's a promise.
What a fantastic game you have here so far. I actually welcomed the lack of forced H-scenes just for the sake of having them. The story is fresh and pulls you into itself and makes you beg for more! I can't wait to see how the MC evolves and changes. Good luck on future updates!
Thank you 🤍 Glad to know you had a great time playing it.
It's a pretty good game, and how well developed it is, the game just gets better every update and it's very noticeable. It has a very good story, very good music, and some very good characters, counting on the things that changed, they made it much better than it already was. Keep up the good work, you are doing pretty well!
Thank you so much for those kind words.🤍
Idk why but whenever I try to download the latest update , it always tells me that I have version 1.0 . Any idea why it's happening?
Hi!
Can you give me more information, please?
Are you trying to download the game here? https://biggering.itch.io/broken-dreams/download/eyJleHBpcmVzIjoxNjc1MzIzOTM4LCJ...
Did you buy the game making a donation?
Well yes , I downloaded it from here only .
Also for more information I don't know know if you want to know about my phone but it's Realmi 9i .
Also I downloaded from the topmost download where it says br.dr_0_2_1-.apk
I also uninstalled the game keeping the save files and re downloaded it but it doesn't seem to be work .
It keeps on saying that I have version 1.0
Sorry for my late response :(
I made this link to download it via Mediafire, don't worry, it's completely safe, I use Mediafire to bring my Patrons early access to new versions.
https://www.mediafire.com/file/qfipenmh0nvefz4/br.dr-0_2_1-.apk/file
Thanks man .
Also this is the best visual novel I've ever played based on the story so far .
Keep up the good work . 😀
(copy of my review)
"Although short as of writing this review(01/22/23), the story is captivating and makes you wanna know what happens next ASAP. I would take a star off because there are a lack of H-scenes but I'm sure that will be addressed in future updates since this game is still fairly early on in it's development. Highly recommend either playing or at least saving for later because there is great potential and a dedicated development team actively working on it."
Thank you so much for the feedback, just wait for the 0.3, too early to talk, but I just want to say, it's been a lot of work, and a lot of testing, all those who have been waiting for lewd content are going to be so happy.
im not played the game because its in very early of the development which means there wont be a much content at least now.But looks like general commenting positive, i will download at future
Looks great from photos i hope you update fast
Thank you for keeping an eye on the game.
I hope yall can make an amazing game from my experience it's 10/10 keep up the work
Thank you so much for playing🤍
Hey your game is soo good but i finish it in one day where can i get the part 2? Pls answer
Hi! The development of the new version is ongoing, without a release date yet, but I will make an announcement about new content very soon, Thank you so much for playing. 🤍
Ok :)
I like really like the story the character everything!
Thank you so much. 🤍
Cool
Thank you so much!
I'm Very Disappointed It Doesn't Work On My Phone 😢
I'm so sorry :( Can you describe what is happening with your game?
Well, Currently This Is My Alt I'm Currently Using My Old Phone Oppo A12 Cus I Lost My New Phone So Just Like It Won't Download 😢🙁
Hello, I'm having a problem right now and it keeps saying error. Whenever I press ignore or quit it just comes back. How do I fix this?
I'm using Android as stated on the error as well)
this is the scene for it says error.
It would also get error when she's reading a notebook
It should be fixed by pressing the ignore button, It not be there when the next update comes out, I'm so sorry for the error.
:(
I've Been Experiencing That In Some Games Just Press Ignore
Late reply, but it's the games problem (according to devs the problem was because of custom name or something that they mentioned on discord) so even if you click/tap ignore it'll just get back on some devices and get the error again.
PS: I'll just wait for the update tho since the devs already fixed the bug and they're going to release along with new updates:)
Hi dev pregnancy is in your plans??
Yes.
Nice :)
Hi i had problem with the game
Press ingore, it will go away
just finished very gud
Thank you
ive posted this on your discord already but it says to post it on itch so here i am and if i do start over it crashes
Thank you!
Unfortunately, it seems that the old saves do not work in this version, I recommend you start a new game, if you can't, you should force the application to close in the background applications menu , my apologies for the inconvenience, I will try to make this the last update incompatible with old saves.
This game is amazing.
Thank you so much!
Cool game
Also if you are planning to add more languages into the game i can help with Turkish translation.. If you want, because i didn't saw any developer adding Turkish into their games (on Itch)
Hmmm... Those are certainly weird bugs, I have to see the code again and I will try to
fixit ;)Thank you so much for the feedback!
At the beginning of the project, the plan was to create a linear story, but alas, with all the feedback from my players, (and because I got a great idea) Now the goal is to add decisions that change your playthrough FOREVER, you will be able to see it on the new version that is coming very soon ;) Actually, these decisions will don't make so much difference in the story (apparently) but be careful... everything is going to change depending on what you chose.
For the Turkish translation, join the discord if you want to and send me a message---> https://discord.gg/MNPsBbXWe2
Have a nice day, my friend!
Well I have good english-turkhis translation but IDK how those programs work if you know someone that knows it can you tell me or dm to me maybe I can help you with the game too BTW if I can learn how does it works I think I can make somethings faster (Im talking about updates)
needs to have a renamable MC
Working on it, my friend!
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i have a pc question for anyone that can help ... if i get a new graphics card for my older pc will that allow me to play games that my pc has rendering problems with ???
when will the game update btw nice game
Thank you so much! I don't have a specific date for the next update yet.
The discord invite expired
Thank you my friend, now it's fine.
Look's interesting, since it's early stages will wait and see how it develops, will give feedback specifically for the game then.
The only thing I can think of is to point out some traps to avoid as you develop your game. Sorry if this is too wordy and blunt.
- Adding too many characters. Turns the game into a never ending cycle of additions and ultimately a game that never gets completed, makes it harder and harder to put enough character development in every character and can result in a lot of 'doll' characters with cliche/uninteresting personalities. Probably not fun to do either since it just adds more and more work.
- Fixed Patch by patch plotline progression. You might be thinking what do you mean by this, i.e patch 2.1 = plot prog with char A 2.2 = plot prog char B 2.3 plot prog char C then 2.4 plot progpart2 char A.. and so on. Now the Fixed part = you have to play 2.2 and 2.3 plots to unlock 2.4 plot. Whatever you do don't make it like this, it's super frustrating for a reader to have to go back and forth with different characters. A route system is always preferred.
- make a good story and have that be highest priority, some other games just abandon this completely after a while and only focus on making porn scenes and never finish the game.
Well that's all for now good luck.
The first point don't think its to much he only one person work on it
@Amr I mean in the future, dont worry there's nothing im saying about the game right now if it seemed like that. Just want to be sure there's no misunderstanding here.
Oh ok thank you
Thank you so much for the feedback, characters development it's the priority of BROKEN DREAMS before entering other phases of the game, I'm trying my best to bring the players the best visual experience and memorable moments.
For the progression system, I'm working on it, I want to bring the most smooth experience.
I wish you good luck
I think you started to create a good story and I think you should continue like that. I have only one request, if the money system is added in the future updates, please don't break the balance because in some games we earn very little money and the price of what we need to buy is too high. I hope it won't be like this (Sorry for my bad English because my main language is Turkish but I can still understand the story)
Don't worry my friend, there is no plan for adding a money system in the future because I think it doesn't fit with the spirit of the narrative, I want to everyone feel less limited, in my game, you don't have to repeat the same action hundreds of times to get money ( for example). I don't like that on visual novels, we are here for the juicy story. but that's just my opinion my friend, thank you for the feedback!
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Story feels like it moves too fast, but other than that it's a great game.
Thank you for the feedback, my friend, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Will this ever be available for Mac?
I don't want to promise something I'm not completely sure of, but I will try to build a version in the next few days, my friend.