So this game is one of the best visual novels i played the story is really interesting that alot of times it hitted the deepest part of my heart the characters are just adorable i cant wait for the new updates for this game i really hope you you will reach high with this game :)
First time playing this game, it was an amazing experience (didn't finish the game yet) but so far story, animation, music even UI it just amazing and easy and simple to navigate i can feel how much love you put into this game with every character development not just a "woohoo fukkaroonie games" its like story as main dish and h-scene as dessert perfect proportion between fantasy and reality really pull my sympathy and empathy to the character, please take my compliment as motivation rather than pressure that make you focus in my commend rather than doing what you love thank you :)
PS : i found some missing image in "platform android ver 0.2.1 public" which is (me4_natsumi_5, me5_natsumi_6 and me5_natsumi_7, if you already notice this problem i'm sorry and thank you
Man, i really hope, that you will continue to make this game for years, or many more like this one after BrokenDreams, i love the story, characters and everything really (and im blender user, so i absolutely understand how much work was done, and i absolutely love what you have made with school, and everything else! Masterpiece!) For the lewd part, im all in for smaller breasts, so i love your choices with characters. Anyway, looking forward for update, and i just wish that you could make progress tracker, so we would know where you are at making it, anyway, keep going, wish you luck and take care!
Thank you so much, my friend! I'm impressed by how many people this game have been reached, and glad to know some of them are blender users hehe. This is a big project, with big ambitions, it's a reality that a big part of the game depends on the level of support that we receive from the community, but our principal goal it's to make the best visual novel ever🤍 maybe we don't have a millionaire budget, but we have the passion for making a good story, that's all that we need🤍 Again, thank you so much for your feedback🤍
Thanks for the supprt, buddy! I'll all my best to make the game better! I also have game status in discord, so y'all can track the progress of the game. Small tits, big hits!
this game was AMAZING i liked the story a lot but theres 1 thing, pls add more h-scenes ( im a very horny person haha ) other than that this game was very cute and i loved it, looking forward to new updates!!!!
Oh, man🔥you only need to wait a little bit longer for all the content that is coming... omg, I'm so excited. I want to share the scenes that I have already, but I must resist... thanks for your patience in advance, you're not gonna be disappointed.
If you want more information about h-scenes, this post is for you:
this has been the only H-game to ever draw me in with it's story, the dissapoitment i felt when the game said "to be continued" completely dissapeared when i thougt of how great the experience was
I don't know how you think an concept game like this but, this game hits me so hard because i do keep dreaming a certain girl in a sea where waves are so gentle while the moon shine above us but that was back then. Up until this day i kept waiting to go back in that dream but i can't to the point i forgotten i had a peaceful dream like in the game, but this game made me remember all over again, i don't care about the 18+ scene i want the upcoming stories in the future please be well and keep up the good work!!
EXCELLENT GAME!!! I loved it a lot!! I am looking forward to the next version, please release it soon!! Congratulations to the developers!! Just add the Spanish language, please :D
Thank you so much🤍To be completely honest, adding new languages is not on our plans (right now). If the community keeps growing, we could reconsider it :)
Oh :( ty, Actually, a while ago I played version 0.1 Spanish Mod and I thought it was the original, I enjoyed playing it much more in my native language, for that reason I'm telling you about it, thank you very much c:
The game used to have an official Spanish translation, but we decided to discontinue it because it was so chaotic for testing and debugging, anyway, we're not against the idea of adding more languages in the future.
So a couple of notes playing through 0.2.1 as a new player:
This game, at least as it stands, is obviously a slow burn. It doesn't just jump into the sex. It doesn't (again, as it stands,) use sex as a plot point for the player character like most erotic VNs I've seen, which I can respect. And aside from a shower scene and some spicy pictures you get at the very tail end of the update (unless I fucked up a choice somewhere), there's very little in the NSFW region so far.
The way to move around between locations is fairly seamless, aside from clicking around inside the house. The backgrounds look lovely, and the overall ambiance and lighting are amazing, though one thing I noticed is the distinct lack of music playing outside of conversations and cutscenes. Which while it felt strangely jarring to going from no music to suddenly having what sounds like generic atmospheric piano number 1, it's not so much of a turn off that I would quit playing.
The female characters are beautifully made and extremely well written. There's an obvious amount of depth to the girls so far that can be felt just by talking to them in cutscenes and learning of their problems and traumas through storytelling; Natsumi's abuse and need to put others above herself, Kaede's need for self acceptance, Hana's want for attention, the principals need to be in complete control (or for dick I can't figure out which). Though I wish the dev had gone more in depth with the other side of Nova's coin that causes the player to be more "chaotic".
The only problem I have so far is that the player character feels like they're going out of their way to be an unlikable dick. Almost like he just took a job in psychology to not do, y'know, his job as a psychologist. And his inner monologues reinforce that. I'm not sure, but his disdain for what he does just feels kinda forced instead of being naturally socially awkward in their own way.
In short, the game so far is amazing. The art, the style, the writing and feel are very impressive. And tackling issues like mental health in an erotic VN, while I'm sure has been done before, makes for a very different and unique story. The only thing I ask, is make the MC not necessarily likable, but at least more relatable or tolerable. Solid work dev, I will be watching this game with great interest.
Thank you for taking the time to write such an extensive review, one o my principal goals is to make the sandbox part less empty, adding music, people, and more interactions.
I appreciate all the comments about the graphics, it's been a lot of work to achieve what I wanted to do since the beginning, talking about the visuals.
And one more thing, you're not the only one complaining about the MC's behavior, and that's completely fine, the game is at a pretty early stage, and for obvious reasons, I haven't had the opportunity to explain more about his relations, emotions, and most importantly, his past, I know that play an incomplete game with a depth story could be like reading a book with a bad story, that's a reality I can understand, the only thing I need from all my players is patience, nothing in the story is there just for keep adding content endlessly, I'm very cautious when it comes to writing because I want a story that makes sense. Thank you so much for all the feedback 🤍
You're welcome for the feedback, and I thank you for your reply. The work you've put in definitely shows in what's currently available, and I find it amazing as it is.
And I don't mean to come off as complaining about the MC's behavior, but he is definitely confusing coming from an outside perspective who isn't aware of the story.
Thank you again for taking the time to review my feedback though! And please keep doing what you do. As I said, I look forward to seeing what this will become, and I will be watching with great interest. :) ❤️
The story is really interesting, I can't wait to see more! Really rather early for me to comment as I haven't made it very far in the game yet but, between that and the screenshots it's easy to tell that the game is better than you'd probably expect it to be.
I really like how fresh this game feels. Not that it really matters how you usually see the same school and house in other VN's but I like how it's different and how much better they look in this one. Also am really liking how different the character models are even though it's Koikatsu, usually they look a little plastic-y and almost doll like. I mean, they still do but they also look softer and much more high-quality than usual. That coupled with the lighting makes them look even better than they already are!
Thank you so much🤍 A little bit of recognition for details is always an incredible compliment for devs, I'm glad you liked all the backgrounds and atmosphere that I tried to create in the game, you can expect more quality on future releases, that's a promise.
What a fantastic game you have here so far. I actually welcomed the lack of forced H-scenes just for the sake of having them. The story is fresh and pulls you into itself and makes you beg for more! I can't wait to see how the MC evolves and changes. Good luck on future updates!
It's a pretty good game, and how well developed it is, the game just gets better every update and it's very noticeable. It has a very good story, very good music, and some very good characters, counting on the things that changed, they made it much better than it already was. Keep up the good work, you are doing pretty well!
"Although short as of writing this review(01/22/23), the story is captivating and makes you wanna know what happens next ASAP. I would take a star off because there are a lack of H-scenes but I'm sure that will be addressed in future updates since this game is still fairly early on in it's development. Highly recommend either playing or at least saving for later because there is great potential and a dedicated development team actively working on it."
Thank you so much for the feedback, just wait for the 0.3, too early to talk, but I just want to say, it's been a lot of work, and a lot of testing, all those who have been waiting for lewd content are going to be so happy.
im not played the game because its in very early of the development which means there wont be a much content at least now.But looks like general commenting positive, i will download at future
Hi! The development of the new version is ongoing, without a release date yet, but I will make an announcement about new content very soon, Thank you so much for playing. 🤍
Late reply, but it's the games problem (according to devs the problem was because of custom name or something that they mentioned on discord) so even if you click/tap ignore it'll just get back on some devices and get the error again.
PS: I'll just wait for the update tho since the devs already fixed the bug and they're going to release along with new updates:)
Thank you! Unfortunately, it seems that the old saves do not work in this version, I recommend you start a new game, if you can't, you should force the application to close in the background applications menu , my apologies for the inconvenience, I will try to make this the last update incompatible with old saves.
Also if you are planning to add more languages into the game i can help with Turkish translation.. If you want, because i didn't saw any developer adding Turkish into their games (on Itch)
Hmmm... Those are certainly weird bugs, I have to see the code again and I will try to fix it ;)
Thank you so much for the feedback!
At the beginning of the project, the plan was to create a linear story, but alas, with all the feedback from my players, (and because I got a great idea) Now the goal is to add decisions that change your playthrough FOREVER, you will be able to see it on the new version that is coming very soon ;) Actually, these decisions will don't make so much difference in the story (apparently) but be careful... everything is going to change depending on what you chose.
For the Turkish translation, join the discord if you want to and send me a message---> https://discord.gg/MNPsBbXWe2
Well I have good english-turkhis translation but IDK how those programs work if you know someone that knows it can you tell me or dm to me maybe I can help you with the game too BTW if I can learn how does it works I think I can make somethings faster (Im talking about updates)
i have a pc question for anyone that can help ... if i get a new graphics card for my older pc will that allow me to play games that my pc has rendering problems with ???
Look's interesting, since it's early stages will wait and see how it develops, will give feedback specifically for the game then.
The only thing I can think of is to point out some traps to avoid as you develop your game. Sorry if this is too wordy and blunt.
- Adding too many characters. Turns the game into a never ending cycle of additions and ultimately a game that never gets completed, makes it harder and harder to put enough character development in every character and can result in a lot of 'doll' characters with cliche/uninteresting personalities. Probably not fun to do either since it just adds more and more work.
- Fixed Patch by patch plotline progression. You might be thinking what do you mean by this, i.e patch 2.1 = plot prog with char A 2.2 = plot prog char B 2.3 plot prog char C then 2.4 plot progpart2 char A.. and so on. Now the Fixed part = you have to play 2.2 and 2.3 plots to unlock 2.4 plot. Whatever you do don't make it like this, it's super frustrating for a reader to have to go back and forth with different characters. A route system is always preferred.
- make a good story and have that be highest priority, some other games just abandon this completely after a while and only focus on making porn scenes and never finish the game.
@Amr I mean in the future, dont worry there's nothing im saying about the game right now if it seemed like that. Just want to be sure there's no misunderstanding here.
Thank you so much for the feedback, characters development it's the priority of BROKEN DREAMS before entering other phases of the game, I'm trying my best to bring the players the best visual experience and memorable moments.
For the progression system, I'm working on it, I want to bring the most smooth experience.
I think you started to create a good story and I think you should continue like that. I have only one request, if the money system is added in the future updates, please don't break the balance because in some games we earn very little money and the price of what we need to buy is too high. I hope it won't be like this (Sorry for my bad English because my main language is Turkish but I can still understand the story)
Don't worry my friend, there is no plan for adding a money system in the future because I think it doesn't fit with the spirit of the narrative, I want to everyone feel less limited, in my game, you don't have to repeat the same action hundreds of times to get money ( for example). I don't like that on visual novels, we are here for the juicy story. but that's just my opinion my friend, thank you for the feedback!
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So this game is one of the best visual novels i played the story is really interesting that alot of times it hitted the deepest part of my heart the characters are just adorable i cant wait for the new updates for this game i really hope you you will reach high with this game :)
I hate that Itch.io doesn't allow me to pin comments :´) Thank you so much, your kind words inspire my job🤍
This game is so absurdly good in such an early stage it's actually unbelievable
Thank you so much🤍
this game is intresting, the story was so cool. watch my word, this game will trending/viral in no time.
Thank you! I hope so, my friend🤍
whether this game will be continued or not. actually this game is very interesting. I hope this game continues :)
The development is ongoing and everything suggests that it will continue for a long long time ;)
First time playing this game, it was an amazing experience (didn't finish the game yet) but so far story, animation, music even UI it just amazing and easy and simple to navigate i can feel how much love you put into this game with every character development not just a "woohoo fukkaroonie games" its like story as main dish and h-scene as dessert perfect proportion between fantasy and reality really pull my sympathy and empathy to the character, please take my compliment as motivation rather than pressure that make you focus in my commend rather than doing what you love thank you :)
PS : i found some missing image in "platform android ver 0.2.1 public" which is (me4_natsumi_5, me5_natsumi_6 and me5_natsumi_7, if you already notice this problem i'm sorry and thank you
Thank you 🤍
Don't worry, nothing will stop me from creating what I love :)
Man, i really hope, that you will continue to make this game for years, or many more like this one after BrokenDreams, i love the story, characters and everything really (and im blender user, so i absolutely understand how much work was done, and i absolutely love what you have made with school, and everything else! Masterpiece!) For the lewd part, im all in for smaller breasts, so i love your choices with characters. Anyway, looking forward for update, and i just wish that you could make progress tracker, so we would know where you are at making it, anyway, keep going, wish you luck and take care!
Thank you so much, my friend!
I'm impressed by how many people this game have been reached, and glad to know some of them are blender users hehe. This is a big project, with big ambitions, it's a reality that a big part of the game depends on the level of support that we receive from the community, but our principal goal it's to make the best visual novel ever🤍 maybe we don't have a millionaire budget, but we have the passion for making a good story, that's all that we need🤍 Again, thank you so much for your feedback🤍
Thanks for the supprt, buddy! I'll all my best to make the game better! I also have game status in discord, so y'all can track the progress of the game. Small tits, big hits!
this game was AMAZING i liked the story a lot but theres 1 thing, pls add more h-scenes ( im a very horny person haha ) other than that this game was very cute and i loved it, looking forward to new updates!!!!
:3
Oh, man🔥you only need to wait a little bit longer for all the content that is coming... omg, I'm so excited. I want to share the scenes that I have already, but I must resist... thanks for your patience in advance, you're not gonna be disappointed.
If you want more information about h-scenes, this post is for you:
https://biggering.itch.io/broken-dreams/devlog/483478/0-3-news
Thank you for your kind words 🤍
this has been the only H-game to ever draw me in with it's story, the dissapoitment i felt when the game said "to be continued" completely dissapeared when i thougt of how great the experience was
I'm glad you liked it 🤍
*chef kiss* great story it's give me tears when mc welcoming natsumi can't wait for next update.
Ohhhh when want to watching tv with natsumi the image is error i hope you can fix it, im playing on android tho
Noted ✅ Thank you so much for your feedback 🤍
Image 'me4_natsumi_5' not found is what I got as well.
Can Confirm that is present on the PC version too.
I don't know how you think an concept game like this but, this game hits me so hard because i do keep dreaming a certain girl in a sea where waves are so gentle while the moon shine above us but that was back then. Up until this day i kept waiting to go back in that dream but i can't to the point i forgotten i had a peaceful dream like in the game, but this game made me remember all over again, i don't care about the 18+ scene i want the upcoming stories in the future please be well and keep up the good work!!
Wow, thank you for sharing your experience here🤍 makes me feel that this game has a special bright.
EXCELLENT GAME!!! I loved it a lot!! I am looking forward to the next version, please release it soon!! Congratulations to the developers!! Just add the Spanish language, please :D
Bro how much time it will take to complete this game?
A normal playthrough is around 3 hrs or so, that depends on your reading speed.
Thank you so much🤍To be completely honest, adding new languages is not on our plans (right now). If the community keeps growing, we could reconsider it :)
Oh :( ty, Actually, a while ago I played version 0.1 Spanish Mod and I thought it was the original, I enjoyed playing it much more in my native language, for that reason I'm telling you about it, thank you very much c:
The game used to have an official Spanish translation, but we decided to discontinue it because it was so chaotic for testing and debugging, anyway, we're not against the idea of adding more languages in the future.
So a couple of notes playing through 0.2.1 as a new player:
This game, at least as it stands, is obviously a slow burn. It doesn't just jump into the sex. It doesn't (again, as it stands,) use sex as a plot point for the player character like most erotic VNs I've seen, which I can respect. And aside from a shower scene and some spicy pictures you get at the very tail end of the update (unless I fucked up a choice somewhere), there's very little in the NSFW region so far.
The way to move around between locations is fairly seamless, aside from clicking around inside the house. The backgrounds look lovely, and the overall ambiance and lighting are amazing, though one thing I noticed is the distinct lack of music playing outside of conversations and cutscenes. Which while it felt strangely jarring to going from no music to suddenly having what sounds like generic atmospheric piano number 1, it's not so much of a turn off that I would quit playing.
The female characters are beautifully made and extremely well written. There's an obvious amount of depth to the girls so far that can be felt just by talking to them in cutscenes and learning of their problems and traumas through storytelling; Natsumi's abuse and need to put others above herself, Kaede's need for self acceptance, Hana's want for attention, the principals need to be in complete control (or for dick I can't figure out which). Though I wish the dev had gone more in depth with the other side of Nova's coin that causes the player to be more "chaotic".
The only problem I have so far is that the player character feels like they're going out of their way to be an unlikable dick. Almost like he just took a job in psychology to not do, y'know, his job as a psychologist. And his inner monologues reinforce that. I'm not sure, but his disdain for what he does just feels kinda forced instead of being naturally socially awkward in their own way.
In short, the game so far is amazing. The art, the style, the writing and feel are very impressive. And tackling issues like mental health in an erotic VN, while I'm sure has been done before, makes for a very different and unique story. The only thing I ask, is make the MC not necessarily likable, but at least more relatable or tolerable. Solid work dev, I will be watching this game with great interest.
Thank you for taking the time to write such an extensive review, one o my principal goals is to make the sandbox part less empty, adding music, people, and more interactions.
I appreciate all the comments about the graphics, it's been a lot of work to achieve what I wanted to do since the beginning, talking about the visuals.
And one more thing, you're not the only one complaining about the MC's behavior, and that's completely fine, the game is at a pretty early stage, and for obvious reasons, I haven't had the opportunity to explain more about his relations, emotions, and most importantly, his past, I know that play an incomplete game with a depth story could be like reading a book with a bad story, that's a reality I can understand, the only thing I need from all my players is patience, nothing in the story is there just for keep adding content endlessly, I'm very cautious when it comes to writing because I want a story that makes sense. Thank you so much for all the feedback 🤍
You're welcome for the feedback, and I thank you for your reply. The work you've put in definitely shows in what's currently available, and I find it amazing as it is.
And I don't mean to come off as complaining about the MC's behavior, but he is definitely confusing coming from an outside perspective who isn't aware of the story.
Thank you again for taking the time to review my feedback though! And please keep doing what you do. As I said, I look forward to seeing what this will become, and I will be watching with great interest. :) ❤️
I love the amount of effort put into the design of this game. Like even this itchio page is so fun to look at.
Thank you 🤍
The story is really interesting, I can't wait to see more! Really rather early for me to comment as I haven't made it very far in the game yet but, between that and the screenshots it's easy to tell that the game is better than you'd probably expect it to be.
I really like how fresh this game feels. Not that it really matters how you usually see the same school and house in other VN's but I like how it's different and how much better they look in this one. Also am really liking how different the character models are even though it's Koikatsu, usually they look a little plastic-y and almost doll like. I mean, they still do but they also look softer and much more high-quality than usual. That coupled with the lighting makes them look even better than they already are!
Thank you so much🤍 A little bit of recognition for details is always an incredible compliment for devs, I'm glad you liked all the backgrounds and atmosphere that I tried to create in the game, you can expect more quality on future releases, that's a promise.
What a fantastic game you have here so far. I actually welcomed the lack of forced H-scenes just for the sake of having them. The story is fresh and pulls you into itself and makes you beg for more! I can't wait to see how the MC evolves and changes. Good luck on future updates!
Thank you 🤍 Glad to know you had a great time playing it.
It's a pretty good game, and how well developed it is, the game just gets better every update and it's very noticeable. It has a very good story, very good music, and some very good characters, counting on the things that changed, they made it much better than it already was. Keep up the good work, you are doing pretty well!
Thank you so much for those kind words.🤍
Idk why but whenever I try to download the latest update , it always tells me that I have version 1.0 . Any idea why it's happening?
Hi!
Can you give me more information, please?
Are you trying to download the game here? https://biggering.itch.io/broken-dreams/download/eyJleHBpcmVzIjoxNjc1MzIzOTM4LCJ...
Did you buy the game making a donation?
Well yes , I downloaded it from here only .
Also for more information I don't know know if you want to know about my phone but it's Realmi 9i .
Also I downloaded from the topmost download where it says br.dr_0_2_1-.apk
I also uninstalled the game keeping the save files and re downloaded it but it doesn't seem to be work .
It keeps on saying that I have version 1.0
Sorry for my late response :(
I made this link to download it via Mediafire, don't worry, it's completely safe, I use Mediafire to bring my Patrons early access to new versions.
https://www.mediafire.com/file/qfipenmh0nvefz4/br.dr-0_2_1-.apk/file
Thanks man .
Also this is the best visual novel I've ever played based on the story so far .
Keep up the good work . 😀
(copy of my review)
"Although short as of writing this review(01/22/23), the story is captivating and makes you wanna know what happens next ASAP. I would take a star off because there are a lack of H-scenes but I'm sure that will be addressed in future updates since this game is still fairly early on in it's development. Highly recommend either playing or at least saving for later because there is great potential and a dedicated development team actively working on it."
Thank you so much for the feedback, just wait for the 0.3, too early to talk, but I just want to say, it's been a lot of work, and a lot of testing, all those who have been waiting for lewd content are going to be so happy.
im not played the game because its in very early of the development which means there wont be a much content at least now.But looks like general commenting positive, i will download at future
Looks great from photos i hope you update fast
Thank you for keeping an eye on the game.
I hope yall can make an amazing game from my experience it's 10/10 keep up the work
Thank you so much for playing🤍
Hey your game is soo good but i finish it in one day where can i get the part 2? Pls answer
Hi! The development of the new version is ongoing, without a release date yet, but I will make an announcement about new content very soon, Thank you so much for playing. 🤍
Ok :)
I like really like the story the character everything!
Thank you so much. 🤍
Cool
Thank you so much!
I'm Very Disappointed It Doesn't Work On My Phone 😢
I'm so sorry :( Can you describe what is happening with your game?
Well, Currently This Is My Alt I'm Currently Using My Old Phone Oppo A12 Cus I Lost My New Phone So Just Like It Won't Download 😢🙁
Hello, I'm having a problem right now and it keeps saying error. Whenever I press ignore or quit it just comes back. How do I fix this?
I'm using Android as stated on the error as well)
this is the scene for it says error.
It would also get error when she's reading a notebook
It should be fixed by pressing the ignore button, It not be there when the next update comes out, I'm so sorry for the error.
:(
I've Been Experiencing That In Some Games Just Press Ignore
Late reply, but it's the games problem (according to devs the problem was because of custom name or something that they mentioned on discord) so even if you click/tap ignore it'll just get back on some devices and get the error again.
PS: I'll just wait for the update tho since the devs already fixed the bug and they're going to release along with new updates:)
Hi dev pregnancy is in your plans??
Yes.
Nice :)
Hi i had problem with the game
Press ingore, it will go away
just finished very gud
Thank you
ive posted this on your discord already but it says to post it on itch so here i am and if i do start over it crashes
Thank you!
Unfortunately, it seems that the old saves do not work in this version, I recommend you start a new game, if you can't, you should force the application to close in the background applications menu , my apologies for the inconvenience, I will try to make this the last update incompatible with old saves.
This game is amazing.
Thank you so much!
Cool game
Also if you are planning to add more languages into the game i can help with Turkish translation.. If you want, because i didn't saw any developer adding Turkish into their games (on Itch)
Hmmm... Those are certainly weird bugs, I have to see the code again and I will try to
fixit ;)Thank you so much for the feedback!
At the beginning of the project, the plan was to create a linear story, but alas, with all the feedback from my players, (and because I got a great idea) Now the goal is to add decisions that change your playthrough FOREVER, you will be able to see it on the new version that is coming very soon ;) Actually, these decisions will don't make so much difference in the story (apparently) but be careful... everything is going to change depending on what you chose.
For the Turkish translation, join the discord if you want to and send me a message---> https://discord.gg/MNPsBbXWe2
Have a nice day, my friend!
Well I have good english-turkhis translation but IDK how those programs work if you know someone that knows it can you tell me or dm to me maybe I can help you with the game too BTW if I can learn how does it works I think I can make somethings faster (Im talking about updates)
needs to have a renamable MC
Working on it, my friend!
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i have a pc question for anyone that can help ... if i get a new graphics card for my older pc will that allow me to play games that my pc has rendering problems with ???
when will the game update btw nice game
Thank you so much! I don't have a specific date for the next update yet.
The discord invite expired
Thank you my friend, now it's fine.
Look's interesting, since it's early stages will wait and see how it develops, will give feedback specifically for the game then.
The only thing I can think of is to point out some traps to avoid as you develop your game. Sorry if this is too wordy and blunt.
- Adding too many characters. Turns the game into a never ending cycle of additions and ultimately a game that never gets completed, makes it harder and harder to put enough character development in every character and can result in a lot of 'doll' characters with cliche/uninteresting personalities. Probably not fun to do either since it just adds more and more work.
- Fixed Patch by patch plotline progression. You might be thinking what do you mean by this, i.e patch 2.1 = plot prog with char A 2.2 = plot prog char B 2.3 plot prog char C then 2.4 plot progpart2 char A.. and so on. Now the Fixed part = you have to play 2.2 and 2.3 plots to unlock 2.4 plot. Whatever you do don't make it like this, it's super frustrating for a reader to have to go back and forth with different characters. A route system is always preferred.
- make a good story and have that be highest priority, some other games just abandon this completely after a while and only focus on making porn scenes and never finish the game.
Well that's all for now good luck.
The first point don't think its to much he only one person work on it
@Amr I mean in the future, dont worry there's nothing im saying about the game right now if it seemed like that. Just want to be sure there's no misunderstanding here.
Oh ok thank you
Thank you so much for the feedback, characters development it's the priority of BROKEN DREAMS before entering other phases of the game, I'm trying my best to bring the players the best visual experience and memorable moments.
For the progression system, I'm working on it, I want to bring the most smooth experience.
I wish you good luck
I think you started to create a good story and I think you should continue like that. I have only one request, if the money system is added in the future updates, please don't break the balance because in some games we earn very little money and the price of what we need to buy is too high. I hope it won't be like this (Sorry for my bad English because my main language is Turkish but I can still understand the story)
Don't worry my friend, there is no plan for adding a money system in the future because I think it doesn't fit with the spirit of the narrative, I want to everyone feel less limited, in my game, you don't have to repeat the same action hundreds of times to get money ( for example). I don't like that on visual novels, we are here for the juicy story. but that's just my opinion my friend, thank you for the feedback!
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Story feels like it moves too fast, but other than that it's a great game.
Thank you for the feedback, my friend, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Will this ever be available for Mac?
I don't want to promise something I'm not completely sure of, but I will try to build a version in the next few days, my friend.