Also if you are planning to add more languages into the game i can help with Turkish translation.. If you want, because i didn't saw any developer adding Turkish into their games (on Itch)
Hmmm... Those are certainly weird bugs, I have to see the code again and I will try to fix it ;)
Thank you so much for the feedback!
At the beginning of the project, the plan was to create a linear story, but alas, with all the feedback from my players, (and because I got a great idea) Now the goal is to add decisions that change your playthrough FOREVER, you will be able to see it on the new version that is coming very soon ;) Actually, these decisions will don't make so much difference in the story (apparently) but be careful... everything is going to change depending on what you chose.
For the Turkish translation, join the discord if you want to and send me a message---> https://discord.gg/MNPsBbXWe2
Well I have good english-turkhis translation but IDK how those programs work if you know someone that knows it can you tell me or dm to me maybe I can help you with the game too BTW if I can learn how does it works I think I can make somethings faster (Im talking about updates)
i have a pc question for anyone that can help ... if i get a new graphics card for my older pc will that allow me to play games that my pc has rendering problems with ???
Look's interesting, since it's early stages will wait and see how it develops, will give feedback specifically for the game then.
The only thing I can think of is to point out some traps to avoid as you develop your game. Sorry if this is too wordy and blunt.
- Adding too many characters. Turns the game into a never ending cycle of additions and ultimately a game that never gets completed, makes it harder and harder to put enough character development in every character and can result in a lot of 'doll' characters with cliche/uninteresting personalities. Probably not fun to do either since it just adds more and more work.
- Fixed Patch by patch plotline progression. You might be thinking what do you mean by this, i.e patch 2.1 = plot prog with char A 2.2 = plot prog char B 2.3 plot prog char C then 2.4 plot progpart2 char A.. and so on. Now the Fixed part = you have to play 2.2 and 2.3 plots to unlock 2.4 plot. Whatever you do don't make it like this, it's super frustrating for a reader to have to go back and forth with different characters. A route system is always preferred.
- make a good story and have that be highest priority, some other games just abandon this completely after a while and only focus on making porn scenes and never finish the game.
@Amr I mean in the future, dont worry there's nothing im saying about the game right now if it seemed like that. Just want to be sure there's no misunderstanding here.
Thank you so much for the feedback, characters development it's the priority of BROKEN DREAMS before entering other phases of the game, I'm trying my best to bring the players the best visual experience and memorable moments.
For the progression system, I'm working on it, I want to bring the most smooth experience.
I think you started to create a good story and I think you should continue like that. I have only one request, if the money system is added in the future updates, please don't break the balance because in some games we earn very little money and the price of what we need to buy is too high. I hope it won't be like this (Sorry for my bad English because my main language is Turkish but I can still understand the story)
Don't worry my friend, there is no plan for adding a money system in the future because I think it doesn't fit with the spirit of the narrative, I want to everyone feel less limited, in my game, you don't have to repeat the same action hundreds of times to get money ( for example). I don't like that on visual novels, we are here for the juicy story. but that's just my opinion my friend, thank you for the feedback!
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Also if you are planning to add more languages into the game i can help with Turkish translation.. If you want, because i didn't saw any developer adding Turkish into their games (on Itch)
Hmmm... Those are certainly weird bugs, I have to see the code again and I will try to
fixit ;)Thank you so much for the feedback!
At the beginning of the project, the plan was to create a linear story, but alas, with all the feedback from my players, (and because I got a great idea) Now the goal is to add decisions that change your playthrough FOREVER, you will be able to see it on the new version that is coming very soon ;) Actually, these decisions will don't make so much difference in the story (apparently) but be careful... everything is going to change depending on what you chose.
For the Turkish translation, join the discord if you want to and send me a message---> https://discord.gg/MNPsBbXWe2
Have a nice day, my friend!
Well I have good english-turkhis translation but IDK how those programs work if you know someone that knows it can you tell me or dm to me maybe I can help you with the game too BTW if I can learn how does it works I think I can make somethings faster (Im talking about updates)
needs to have a renamable MC
Working on it, my friend!
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i have a pc question for anyone that can help ... if i get a new graphics card for my older pc will that allow me to play games that my pc has rendering problems with ???
when will the game update btw nice game
Thank you so much! I don't have a specific date for the next update yet.
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Thank you my friend, now it's fine.
Look's interesting, since it's early stages will wait and see how it develops, will give feedback specifically for the game then.
The only thing I can think of is to point out some traps to avoid as you develop your game. Sorry if this is too wordy and blunt.
- Adding too many characters. Turns the game into a never ending cycle of additions and ultimately a game that never gets completed, makes it harder and harder to put enough character development in every character and can result in a lot of 'doll' characters with cliche/uninteresting personalities. Probably not fun to do either since it just adds more and more work.
- Fixed Patch by patch plotline progression. You might be thinking what do you mean by this, i.e patch 2.1 = plot prog with char A 2.2 = plot prog char B 2.3 plot prog char C then 2.4 plot progpart2 char A.. and so on. Now the Fixed part = you have to play 2.2 and 2.3 plots to unlock 2.4 plot. Whatever you do don't make it like this, it's super frustrating for a reader to have to go back and forth with different characters. A route system is always preferred.
- make a good story and have that be highest priority, some other games just abandon this completely after a while and only focus on making porn scenes and never finish the game.
Well that's all for now good luck.
The first point don't think its to much he only one person work on it
@Amr I mean in the future, dont worry there's nothing im saying about the game right now if it seemed like that. Just want to be sure there's no misunderstanding here.
Oh ok thank you
Thank you so much for the feedback, characters development it's the priority of BROKEN DREAMS before entering other phases of the game, I'm trying my best to bring the players the best visual experience and memorable moments.
For the progression system, I'm working on it, I want to bring the most smooth experience.
I wish you good luck
I think you started to create a good story and I think you should continue like that. I have only one request, if the money system is added in the future updates, please don't break the balance because in some games we earn very little money and the price of what we need to buy is too high. I hope it won't be like this (Sorry for my bad English because my main language is Turkish but I can still understand the story)
Don't worry my friend, there is no plan for adding a money system in the future because I think it doesn't fit with the spirit of the narrative, I want to everyone feel less limited, in my game, you don't have to repeat the same action hundreds of times to get money ( for example). I don't like that on visual novels, we are here for the juicy story. but that's just my opinion my friend, thank you for the feedback!
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Story feels like it moves too fast, but other than that it's a great game.
Thank you for the feedback, my friend, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Will this ever be available for Mac?
I don't want to promise something I'm not completely sure of, but I will try to build a version in the next few days, my friend.